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i love the music of this paragraph: "The pressure drops as a storm approaches. The ground animals seek high ground. Birds fly off. They continue doing their animally business. Pawing at grass. Beating wing against wind." ANIMALLY business! welp, a storm is coming here for sure...hope you and your loved ones stay safe, maurice!

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Haha. I kept wondering if I should erase that word, Chin-Sun. But I figured if I can't have fun here, why do it at all?🌺

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exactly. sometimes an odd word jangles just right. :)

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It’s so great to read local writers who are talented and interesting. Yes I think where we come from definitely does shape us.

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Thank you for reading, Kathleen! ✨️

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